This gives me plenty of thoughts on Drael and Tir and has me wonder further how their argument is going to go... I can say confidently, though, that Tir has no personally positive feelings towards anything to do with the Children, and her biggest resentment at the moment is the fact that she's currently there trying to sort things out. The reason she has Kristopher between herself and the Children is so that she can't be accused of manipulating the project to her benefit (which is exactly her intent and the reason she started it in the first place). She doesn't like being seen there and doesn't want much to do with it other than the kids knowing she's the one who gave them this life and they should be grateful.
Personally (ahaha my sadist is showing...) I would like to see him try to fight her, fff, not because it would. Well, I mean, it wouldn't be too interesting, Drael would get in there and then there'd be a long period of "okay Griffith, I know you don't like me much, but talk to me what the fuck is going on. we all hate nobles but you can't just do that.", but I... would like to have Tir deal with it. Would certainly move other plots along much quicker... The worst thing to do to someone who's power hungry is show them what instances they're powerless in, I think. Ahhh goodness wonderful plot, I still don't like you very much Griffith but you are very interesting. :<
Before I get into talking about D'Ivann, ahh, I. How do I say this... I want to help you, if I can, feel comfortable sharing origins of his here? If that means helping to edit or just talking about that piece more, I will do it, and if it's just encouraging and reminding you that your writing is well worth being shared, I can do that too. I am not forcing, there is no disappointment either way, mumble mumble trying to be good...
I love hearing about D'Ivann's perspective here. It really adds... a further element to that enigmatic quality of him, and if it's not too base of me to say, that's. Another rather animalistic thing as well? If you look at a large carnivore, in documentaries and such, you always get the sense that there's something going on behind their eyes, but you can't tell what it is until you watch them in action. That is what this conversation brings to mind, ahh, and it's lovely.
I wish Talbot were a little less difficult so I could give an even halfway worthy response to this, but I do think he certainly can tell that... animalistic nature to D'Ivann's fighting, and I think that drives him further than he realises. I have mentioned that he loses control; I think, were he much less composed and practised and façade-ing, he'd be quite a lot more similar to D'Ivann. I think he's much more similar than he realises or accepts. But ahh it's wonderful, and it gives me this lovely mental image of two dominant male wolves or lions or something herding their pack along, but consistently at odds with one another because there should only be one. (Funny, that, terrible irony. The carnival of the damned, for all those discarded and despised by humanity, but it only has room for one inhumane creature.)
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This gives me plenty of thoughts on Drael and Tir and has me wonder further how their argument is going to go... I can say confidently, though, that Tir has no personally positive feelings towards anything to do with the Children, and her biggest resentment at the moment is the fact that she's currently there trying to sort things out. The reason she has Kristopher between herself and the Children is so that she can't be accused of manipulating the project to her benefit (which is exactly her intent and the reason she started it in the first place). She doesn't like being seen there and doesn't want much to do with it other than the kids knowing she's the one who gave them this life and they should be grateful.
Personally (ahaha my sadist is showing...) I would like to see him try to fight her, fff, not because it would. Well, I mean, it wouldn't be too interesting, Drael would get in there and then there'd be a long period of "okay Griffith, I know you don't like me much, but talk to me what the fuck is going on. we all hate nobles but you can't just do that.", but I... would like to have Tir deal with it. Would certainly move other plots along much quicker... The worst thing to do to someone who's power hungry is show them what instances they're powerless in, I think. Ahhh goodness wonderful plot, I still don't like you very much Griffith but you are very interesting. :<
Before I get into talking about D'Ivann, ahh, I. How do I say this... I want to help you, if I can, feel comfortable sharing origins of his here? If that means helping to edit or just talking about that piece more, I will do it, and if it's just encouraging and reminding you that your writing is well worth being shared, I can do that too. I am not forcing, there is no disappointment either way, mumble mumble trying to be good...
I love hearing about D'Ivann's perspective here. It really adds... a further element to that enigmatic quality of him, and if it's not too base of me to say, that's. Another rather animalistic thing as well? If you look at a large carnivore, in documentaries and such, you always get the sense that there's something going on behind their eyes, but you can't tell what it is until you watch them in action. That is what this conversation brings to mind, ahh, and it's lovely.
I wish Talbot were a little less difficult so I could give an even halfway worthy response to this, but I do think he certainly can tell that... animalistic nature to D'Ivann's fighting, and I think that drives him further than he realises. I have mentioned that he loses control; I think, were he much less composed and practised and façade-ing, he'd be quite a lot more similar to D'Ivann. I think he's much more similar than he realises or accepts. But ahh it's wonderful, and it gives me this lovely mental image of two dominant male wolves or lions or something herding their pack along, but consistently at odds with one another because there should only be one. (Funny, that, terrible irony. The carnival of the damned, for all those discarded and despised by humanity, but it only has room for one inhumane creature.)
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